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She is under my skin
She slides along my vertebral column
She seeks a space to lay her eggs

She is under my skin
She pumps my blood
She devours my flesh

She is under my skin
She nourishes all her children
Their dinner is my life

This rotten meat is an infection
The thing has developed rapidly
Now, her larvas are going to kill me  
7 october 2013
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Student Artist
cute poem
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
thanks :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how this started like some sort of love poem, then become something... else.

Well written, as well. I agree with GypsyMountainman
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
a very different thing :)
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Professional Writer
Very nice. Symbolism? I can see it from many perspectives, and Love it. absolutely great
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
thanks

glad you like my poem :)
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gigglefitt25 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
spectacular piece!
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
Thanks :)
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gigglefitt25 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013   Traditional Artist
np ^_^
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SketerTheSkater Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
whaaaaaaaaaaat
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Nod
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SketerTheSkater Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
:iconscaredplz:
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Kyara007 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beerrkk

I
believe that I will over look my meat in the same way
Better I'll become vegetarian, so I go escape at they
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
the meat is dangerous :D

thanks :)
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Kyara007 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
loool

yes, sure
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