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this was not a choice
when I was younger
I got pregnant
I stopped my studies

when I returned to school
I was not motivated
I had to pay the bills
I had many problems

I had small jobs
I accepted the creepy
I accepted the sordid
Now I give my body

This is not a choice
it's just to survive
to give a life to my son
for him give a future

the evening in the mirror
I look at myself, I cry
because I'm afraid to finish dead
the body lacerated  in a ditch
It gives his life
For its future
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:iconmidnightcrisis97:
Midnightcrisis97 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
It's beautiful!! :tears:
It's like it touched my very soul. :iconsadplz:
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
happy that you like
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williamfdevault Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Writer
powerful, earnest and brilliant
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
thank you it's cool:w00t:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
:D
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
so sad, i wol say im sorry but u are probably sick of hearing that. so im just gonna say, be strong and i hope things turn out for the best xx XD
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
thank you to you
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
:D
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allofmyconfusion Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011   Writer
powerful. nicely done
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
thanks you to you
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rothus66 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good and it is sad but very well written really makes you stop to think.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
thanks
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darkallegiance666 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
This is a very moving poem. Please try to do activities that bring you some pleasure in life too, if this poem is about yourself. If it isn't, then the person who it is about really needs to treat herself or himself as well as they are treating their son, and at least try to find some joy in life. It's a sad situation, but a good poem. :)
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
I write on the idea that crosses my mind
sorry if often sad
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darkallegiance666 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
No - there's absolutely no need to be sorry. That's the good thing about writing - we can get our emotions out that way & express feelings that perhaps we can't express any other way.

My best wishes to you always. :)
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
thank you to you
I wish you all the best as
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2BrightEyes Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Student General Artist
wonderful as usual,
I can really see the story,
like it's been played as a movie before my eyes...
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
thank you, it's nice
if you see the story as a movie
I am pleased, that's cool
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2BrightEyes Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Student General Artist
you're welcome
with the right words it isn't so hard to see the movie
finding the right words, that's the hard part
so I'm gonna say this again to you, good job :D
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
thank you it's cool
I blush lol
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2BrightEyes Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student General Artist
haha you're welcome
:blushes:
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:iconjack0998:
jack0998 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
It sounds real and ugly... There are so much realities like that...
The poem sounds so good!
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
the reality is ugly
writing is a descriptions
thank you nice
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:iconjack0998:
jack0998 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
thank You for the emotion you made me feel! ;-)
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
it's nothing, thank you
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
the reality is ugly
it is a situation that exists
thank you nice
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Whispersareheard Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It has something raw in....something that makes it real...It might be cause to ascribes a reality of some humans..
It is one of the best i read from you.
Congratulations :nod:
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
the reality is ugly
it is a situation that exists
thank you nice
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:iconwhispersareheard:
Whispersareheard Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I am sorry that exists....
yet created a wonderful poem..
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
thanks:flowerpot:
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