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she seeks a loophole
to leave this man
that she does not love

this love was an illusion
a waking nightmare
which has destroyed her life

each day it was hell
make love was a Calvary

condemned to silence
she dreams of freedom

but leaving the hell is not an easy thing
just a lie
just a tragedy
fair to the sadness
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devilla666 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
It was the best time of my life. I didn't leave you. You left one morning without warning after a kiss and saying "I love you more than anything." i loved that facade of a man. I still do. Unfortunately, you are just like Jay only without the psychosis.
No Malice, just an empty heart.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
the love can bite you bad
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TypingTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that is true....
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
:)
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Plainungry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
c'est vraiment beau et beaucoup vivent cette situation.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
je pense aussi, qu'il doit y avoir beaucoup de femmes qui vivent une relation dévastatrice comme je l'ai décrite
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Plainungry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Simplement en écartant les
Barreaux qui la gardent,
Elle se libérerais de sa
Propre prison...

Simplement en faisant le
Trie entre ces sentiments
Et ces peurs
, elle pourrais
de ces cauchemars faire
Des rêves...

L'amour est une douleur
Seulement quand il est
Mal vécu...
Et l'amour n'est une
Douleur que quand il
Est vécu avec la
Mauvaise personne...
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
j'aime bien ton poème aussi,
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Plainungry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
merci j'aime bien continuer les poeme que j'aime bien^^
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
je vois ça :D
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