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she dances in her cage
trapped in this place
her destiny is spoiled

every night she reveals her body
in a stench of alcohol, and of nachos
she takes not
attention to customers

she makes the show on scene
as if the room was empty
as if she was alone in this world

every night she thinks
it's the last time
but the next day
she dances again and again

escape this reality
is a difficult thing
because dancing is her life
she dances in hell
escape from this life
is very hard
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:icongandalfgirl579:
Gandalfgirl579 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is just lovely! :heart:
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
thanks :D
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:icongandalfgirl579:
Gandalfgirl579 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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Be-Back-Soon Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. Great work!
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
:)
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LauraBeez Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i like the concept. And your poem, too. It shows how hard can be making decisions, neing brave, losing everything just to escape.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
I think the decisions are always hard

thank you to you:)
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aliforever331 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, interesting concept...a girl trapped by her dancing
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
thanks:)
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:iconaliforever331:
aliforever331 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :)
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