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My desire is choked
My life is a sacrifice
Religion is my executioner

I am chained to my choice
I wander about like a lost soul in the corridors
This life of deprivation is my cell

I would like to flee and live like the other women
My belief is a pair of handcuffs
She imprisons my life
21 october 2013
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Professional Writer
tears stain my face,
fear grips my heart.
I have felt this.
you have put it well.

gripping
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
happy that you like my work :D
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Artist
vary deep and good
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Thanks :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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bookbrink Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful, almost frightening. I love the emotion you have going on here; great job.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Thanks :)
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SearingBlaze000 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
guess we all feel that way, eh? 'I wander' I think the s is a typo
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
that depends on our sensitivity

:)
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SearingBlaze000 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure does :)
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BenHammonds Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013   Writer
you made good points I think ;) :) good one
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
thanks :)
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Fay-13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013   Traditional Artist
Very well written, the poem flows nicely and I like how you say "my belief is a pair of handcuffs, she imprisons my life"
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
The feeling of imprisonment was important

thanks :)
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Fay-13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013   Traditional Artist
Your very welcome least I could do Fox Emote
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