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the lights are extinct
the wall advances towards me
I'm sick, I am afraid

the crowd ignores my pain
I fall into a black hole
I scream my distress in indifference

help me, this is too hard
help me, give me your hand
I need a little light
the fear of darkness
the indifference of the crowd
she is alone
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle:
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
:)
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6-9Changeling Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
c:
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WaffleGamer Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
a very powerful and emotional piece
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
thanks:D
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Gracefool-Lyn Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I really like this!
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
thanks :D
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Gracefool-Lyn Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
You're welcome
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kmbrother Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
Very morbid and sad, yet very relatible. I enjoyed it.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
thanks :D
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Rejectedbynarcissus Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely amazing :)
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Thanks :D
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bellagallou Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013   Photographer
:wow: Very beautiful your poem!!!

Attrape l’étincelle de mon cœur,
puisse cette chaleur guidé tes pas,
pour que tu retrouve la lueur,
ce doux chemin te guidera.
*
Catch the spark of my heart,
can this heat guided your steps,
so that you find the light,
this soft path will guide you.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
ton poème est pas mal aussi.:)
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:iconbellagallou:
bellagallou Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013   Photographer
:happybounce: hihi!merci
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
de rien
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TypingTurtle Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
We are alone in our loneliness...
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:iconkatsumoto82:
katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
a real nightmare
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TypingTurtle Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"nods" :(
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DancingShadowLeaves Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sad and lovely. :)
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
thanks :)
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DragonTamerDave Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is cool. Sad but awesome
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
thanks :D
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DragonTamerDave Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome
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