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A perfume of dead permeates this rose
like this flower, thou hast withered
Now I'm sad
24 february 2013
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the simplicity of this piece. it's like getting disappointing when all our dreams about the person falls apart like the person itself. I hope the sadness have washed away by now :)
Qita
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
glad that you liked my work:D

the sadness is always there
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GeorgesConcepts Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
The moral: Don't have a rose as a symbol of a relationship. Roses wilt. And don't use a diamond, either. Instead, use the world. Because no matter what goes on on the surface, underneath it'll still be the same.

Nice work, I liked it.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
the rose dies, like love

thanks :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Nice poetry. Concise and meaningful.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Thanks :D
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Very welcome :D
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KurobaFox1412 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How strong the words you've used!
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
thanks :D
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KurobaFox1412 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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