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A perfume of dead permeates this rose
Like this flower, thou hast withered
Now I'm sad
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:icongeorgesconcepts:
The moral: Don't have a rose as a symbol of a relationship. Roses wilt. And don't use a diamond, either. Instead, use the world. Because no matter what goes on on the surface, underneath it'll still be the same.

Nice work, I liked it.
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:iconkatsumoto82:
the rose dies, like love

thanks :)
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!GUDRUN355 Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice poetry. Concise and meaningful.
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!GUDRUN355 Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very welcome :D
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~KurobaFox1412 Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How strong the words you've used!
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~KurobaFox1412 Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Oft the sharpest words are spoken briefly. This was a novelty in your style.
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:iconkatsumoto82:
yes, It is an essay of a different style :D
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