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the night is cold
my bag is filled with candies
I meet a pretty witch in the street

I want to share my candies with her
her bag was enormous
and I'm very greedy

I plunge my hand into her bag
there was nothing, it was strange

The witch looked me in the eyes
at that time,  I realized my error
this was not a disguise
this girl was a witch
gluttony and death
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New-Victory-13 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
Nice piece. Great work, I like it very much :D
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
thanks:)
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New-Victory-13 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome ;)
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
Such an interesting piece! :) I could see where it was going, but you carried it out wonderfully. Great work!
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
thanks:)
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! :)
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HourglassOfLostTime Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
Lol. I find this poem ironic. I'm a practicing pagan of 10 years now & had about 6 bags of candy stolen yesterday when I went in to get a drink. T'is the season for tricks I suppose, lol.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
just a little ironic:)
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