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I want to know the story of my life
I want the ghosts disappear from my head
I want to hear the truth from the mouths of my family

I need to find the key to close the door of nightmare
the weight is too heavy for me
I want to turn the page and forget the past

I want to be a girl like others
it is the image of my dream
she seeks truth
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hiya,

Just confirming that this was a collaborative piece?
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
this is not a collaboration
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, just FYI you submitted it to :iconincahootsliterature:, which is a group for collaborative works.
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TypingTurtle Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I adored it katsu :heart:
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
happy, that you like :)
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
[*sigh* finalement, the box opened.]
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Your leave from original style, if we may suppose that, is very interesting. I can say that I usually like your writing style and topics generally, I collect some and comment on some. I had to listen to Christina when she suggested browsing your facebook page too. Never felt it all was uncalled for. A French or German edition will prove worth reading too, I warrant.
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
it's cool of being in a collection :)
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Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
so beautiful and honest write, i like it so very much, take care Katsu
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I am doing my best :)
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